the graph below shows the populations in india and china since the year of 2000and predicts populations growth untill 2050
the given graph provides information containing the populations
in
Change preposition
of
India
and China
in 2000 and it's
predictions until 2050. generally speaking, the populations both in Correct your spelling
their
India
and China
increased from the beginning until the end of the period.
from the data that's
clear that in 2000, there Correct pronoun usage
it's
is
no people Wrong verb form
were
lived
in Change the form of the verb
living
India
, but it rocketed constantly year by year and being
predicted Change the form of the verb
is
reach
about 1.6 billion Fix the infinitive
to reach
peoples
in 2050. unlike Fix the agreement mistake
people
India
's citizens, in China
there were just above 1.2 billion peoples
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people
lived
in 2000, it slightly went up and forecasted will reach Wrong verb form
living
it's
peak in 2030, about 1.45 billion, as much as the citizens in Replace the word
its
India
at
the same year. After that, the population in Change preposition
in
China
will slowly decreased
Change the verb form
decrease
just
below 1.4 Change preposition
to just
billions
Change to singular
billion
at the end
of the period.Submitted by haloalwan on
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