The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram shows the procedure and tools utilized for producing
cement
, and how the produced
cement
is processed into concrete used for buildings.
Overall
, both procedures consist of mixing several
ingredients
together to form an aggregate final product using a mixer
although
three additional steps are done in the production process of
cement
which are crushing, heating, and grinding the mixed
ingredients
. The
ingredients
for making
cement
, which are limestone and clay are first crushed into powder before being mixed. After the powders are mixed, they enter the rotating heater to be heated to a certain level of temperature. The heated aggregate is
then
ground to create the
cement
powder, ready to be packaged into
cement
bags. The produced
cement
powders are
also
used in the
the
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concrete production process as one of the mixed
ingredients
for the concrete aggregate. Gravel as the major composing ingredient of the concrete takes a half portion of the mix,
while
the other half of the concrete is composed of sand,
cement
, and water with only 25%, 15%, and 10% of the total portion.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words cement, ingredients with synonyms.
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