Comparison of Energy Production The pie charts show information about energy production in a country in two separate years.
The pie charts above give
informations
about how Change the wording
information
pieces of information
produce
energy in a nation in different years (1995 and 2005).
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to produce
Overall
, it is easy to see that coals is
the main material in energy production. Change the verb form
are
Additionally
, the decreasing
in Replace the word
decrease
pecentage
of petro was the biggest among other types.
Using coals always constituted the highest amount in 1995 and 2005 which is 29.80% and 30.93%, respectively. The second position belonged to gas. The figure for Correct your spelling
percentage
this
material was merely less 0.17
% than coals in 1995 and after 10 years it slightly increased Change preposition
than 0.17
of
0.68%. Petro had witnessed a remarkable drop from 29.27% to 19.55% over a Change preposition
to
10 years
period.
Other types making up the smallest amount in 1995 was 4.09%, Correct your spelling
10-year
However
, it was as two-fold as that in 2005. The percentage of nuclear is
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was
gently
higher than Rephrase
slightly
other type
of materials in 1995. It was as Change the wording
another type
other types
three fifth
as Add a hyphen
three-fifth
its
in 2005Correct your spelling
it was
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