The bar chart below shows the percentage participation of men in senior development in three companies between 1980 and the year 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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male

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males

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in senior development in the three companies,

IBM

,

Microsoft

and

Apple

between 1980 and the year 2010.

Overall

,

company

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a company

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of

Apple

was higher during the three years and after that

little

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bit increased but not much

and

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IBM

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IBM's

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lowest started in 1980 at 5% and remained steady in 1985,

Microsoft

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with Microsoft

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and

Apple

at 8%,12%in 1980,in 1985

was

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10,11%.

Furthermore

,

IBM

firm increased in 1990

at

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11%,

in

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and in

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1995 it was higher

almost

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25%

moreover

,

Microsoft

and

Apple

increased but lower than

IBM

in 1995 it was approximately 20%.

Last

but not least,in 2000 and 2010

IBM

dramatically went up and now it was 31% and 62% highest percentage

in

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the end of the period.

Microsoft

also

increased in 2010

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45% and in 2010

Apple

was

lowest

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the lowest

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percentage.

IBM

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IBM's

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started

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point was so low but it grew

ver

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very

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sharply.