You brought some dog food from a store, and it turned out to be the expired one. Write a letter to the store manager about this.
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing a
complain
the wrong item is being sold in your store.
Whenever I use the product from your shop I don't find any wrong item. Replace the word
complaint
However
, I bought pet food last
Saturday and I found it was expired. Besides
this
, my cat is sick due to
this
item and the doctor said to me that she ate something bad. When I remembered I gave him only cookies at night. Furthermore
, one of my neighbours has also
purchased the same product and his dog also
feels sick. I think it was not a coincidence that two pets sickened
at the same time. Add a missing verb
were sickened
Hence
, it is your products which are being infected by the animals. If these animals are continuously affected then
we will close your shop.
I request you to stop selling these products as early as possible. Although
, you could check items before purchasing the pet food. If you do for the sake of animals you will save their lives.
I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Yours FaithfullySubmitted by mobinadurrani43 on
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task response
Ensure that the complaints and concerns are clearly and directly expressed in relation to the pet food issue.
coherence and cohesion
Organize the letter with clear paragraphs, each focused on a single idea or aspect of the complaint.
lexical resource
Use a wider range of vocabulary to express the concerns and complaints more effectively.
grammatical range
Work on the use of appropriate grammar and sentence structures to improve clarity and cohesiveness in the letter.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite