The chart shows the proportion of renewable energy in total energy supply in 4 countries from 1997 to 2010.

Given is the bar chart

comparing

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the percentage of renewable

energy

supplied by

Australia

,

Sweden

,

Iceland

, and

Turkey

between 1997 and 2010.

Overall

,

it is clear that

Iceland

was the biggest consumer among the 4 countries, followed by

Turkey

.

Additionally

, the proportion of

energy

for

Iceland

and

Turkey

was true for

Australia

and

Sweden

during the period shown. In 1997,

while

45% of green

energy

was the starting point in

Iceland

,

Turkey

commenced with 38% in total amount. After 3 years,

Turkey

’s figure hit its highest peak at 40%, it rose sharply by 15 % for

Iceland

in 2000. 70 % of total

energy

consumption turned

Iceland

to be

largest

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consumer among

four

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countries, compared to 35 5 for

Turkey

during the ending period. Moving into the two

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countries,

Australia

’s quantity was higher than that number in

Sweden

, which accounted for 9 % and 5 % respectively in 1997. Surprisingly, Both

Australia

and

Sweden

were seen for the same amount in terms of consumed-related power with 7 % during the next 3 years. In 2010, the percentage of

energy

expenditure in

Sweden

almost doubled to that in

Australia

around 8 % and 4 % respectively.