The chart shows the proportion of renewable energy in total energy supply in 4 countries from 1997 to 2010.

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the percentage of renewable

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supplied by

Australia

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,

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,

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, and

Turkey

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between 1997 and 2010.

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it is clear that

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was the biggest consumer among the 4 countries, followed by

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.

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, the proportion of

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for

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and

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was true for

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and

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during the period shown. In 1997,

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45% of green

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was the starting point in

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,

Turkey

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commenced with 38% in total amount. After 3 years,

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’s figure hit its highest peak at 40%, it rose sharply by 15 % for

Iceland

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in 2000. 70 % of total

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consumption turned

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consumer among

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countries, compared to 35 5 for

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during the ending period. Moving into the two

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countries,

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’s quantity was higher than that number in

Sweden

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, which accounted for 9 % and 5 % respectively in 1997. Surprisingly, Both

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and

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were seen for the same amount in terms of consumed-related power with 7 % during the next 3 years. In 2010, the percentage of

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expenditure in

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almost doubled to that in

Australia

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around 8 % and 4 % respectively.