Write a letter to the manager of the HR department of a company requesting information about the interview that you attended but still waiting for results. In your letter, •describe the position you applied for • why you think the interview went well • why you need the result of the interview

Hello Sir, I hope you are doing great. My name is Lovejit Singh, and applied for the position of Test Technician in your company. The job fair was held
week but I do not receive any
information regarding the recruitment process. I am writing
letter to ask you about the next step of the hiring and know the result of my interview. As you know, I was well prepared and gave all the answers properly which were asked by the manager or the vice president of the company.
In addition
, I
have two years of work experience in the same field which is the prominent condition for
, I
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all other requirements which include the certification of qualification of
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the electrician
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, the job is very important for my career growth that’s why I am waiting for your response as my interview went fantastic.
, it is my humble request to you to please tell me the result of my placement so that I can move near to the company by next week. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, LS
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task response
Provide more specific details about the interview and your qualifications to support your request.
coherence cohesion
The logical structure of the letter could be improved by organizing the content into clearer paragraphs.
lexical resource
Use a wider range of vocabulary and more formal language appropriate for a business letter.
grammatical range
Pay attention to subject-verb agreement, punctuation, and sentence structure to enhance grammatical accuracy.


Formal and informal language refers to using different forms of language in different settings.

In informal writing, you can use contractions such as I’ll and Сan’t.

In formal writing, you should write I will and Can not.

Do not use exclamation mark in formal writing, but you can use it in informal writing.

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