the charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in additon to English, in 2000 and 2010.

the charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in additon to English, in 2000 and 2010.
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The pie charts illustrate how much
water
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is used for three different purposes ranging from industrial to domestic
use
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in six major regions across the globe.
Overall
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,
agricultural
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took up the biggest part of
water
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, except in
Europe
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and North
America
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. The
use
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of
water
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is only limited
for
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to
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industrial purposes in all regions.
To begin
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with,
Africa
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and
Asia
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mostly
use
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their
water
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for agricultural activities. Central
Asia
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is the biggest contingent
who
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apply
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use
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using
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88%
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water
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of water
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resources. It
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then
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was then
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followed by
Africa
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, South East
Asia
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and South
America
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in
the
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second,
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third and fourth place,
spend
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spending
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around 84%, 81%, and 71%, respectively. Meanwhile, North
America
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and
Europe
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spend only a third of the total
water
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in Agriculture.
In contrast
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water
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use
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for industrial activities took up the smallest part ranging from 7% to 19% in each region. Surprisingly, both
in
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apply
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central and south
Asia
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use
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only 7%
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water
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of water
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for industrial. In
Africa
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, North
America
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,
Europe
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and South
America
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use
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the
water
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about 9%, 13%, 15% and 19%, respectively. The rest of the
water
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is
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use
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used
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for industrial,
where
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whereas
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in
Asia
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,
Africa
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, and South
America
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, the
water
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use
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was only around 5% to 12%.
However
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, North
America
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(48%) and
Europe
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(53%)
use
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half of the
water
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for Industrial purposes.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, use, europe, america, africa, asia with synonyms.
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