the charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in additon to English, in 2000 and 2010.

the charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in additon to English, in 2000 and 2010.
The pie charts illustrate how much
water
is used for three different purposes ranging from industrial to domestic
use
in six major regions across the globe.
Overall
,
agricultural
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agriculture
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took up the biggest part of
water
, except in
Europe
and North
America
. The
use
of
water
is only limited
for
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to
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industrial purposes in all regions.
To begin
with,
Africa
and
Asia
mostly
use
their
water
for agricultural activities. Central
Asia
is the biggest contingent
who
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use
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88%
water
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of water
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resources. It
then
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was then
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followed by
Africa
, South East
Asia
and South
America
in
the
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second,
third and fourth place,
spend
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around 84%, 81%, and 71%, respectively. Meanwhile, North
America
and
Europe
spend only a third of the total
water
in Agriculture.
In contrast
,
water
use
for industrial activities took up the smallest part ranging from 7% to 19% in each region. Surprisingly, both
in
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central and south
Asia
use
only 7%
water
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for industrial. In
Africa
, North
America
,
Europe
and South
America
use
the
water
about 9%, 13%, 15% and 19%, respectively. The rest of the
water
is
use
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used
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for industrial,
where
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whereas
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in
Asia
,
Africa
, and South
America
, the
water
use
was only around 5% to 12%.
However
, North
America
(48%) and
Europe
(53%)
use
half of the
water
for Industrial purposes.
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