The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
The pie charts illustrate the proportion of how many British
students
at a University in England were able to speak foreign languages
besides
English, reported from 2000 to 2010.
Overall
, there were little changes that
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be observed. The majority speak Spanish as their
second
language
,
however
, the
German
language
witnessed no changes over the period.
To begin
with, there were about approximately a third of the
students
who spoke Spanish only, who took up the biggest proportion in 2000. Followed by no other
language
(20%), French (15%) and another
language
(15%) combined took up half of the population.
Students
who spoke two other languages and
German
only were about 10% each. In the
second
pie chart, 5% growth could be seen in each category,
besides
no other
language
, French and
German
.
Students
who spoke Spanish only as their
second
language
still took up the biggest percentage of the population exactly 35%. The
second
and third places were followed by
students
who spoke French only and two other languages 20% and 15%, respectively. The
last
three remaining categories,
students
who spoke no other
language
, another
language
and
German
were only 10% each.
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