The line graph below shows the changes in the rate of sales of Gold in Dubai in one year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparison where relevant.

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during 12 months.

Overall

,

it is clear that

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fluctuation

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rate which

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hits its maximum rate in March and the minimum in

Julay

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July

and September.

To begin

with, in the first month of the year, Dubai's gold sales

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200

millions

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Dirhams

and in

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february

febraury

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it was increased by just 20

millions

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dirhams

.

Additionally

, March accounted for the

most

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highest

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proportion in 2002 with

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exactly 350

millions

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of

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Dirhams

. Over the following 4 months, the figure had a gradual decrease till

Julay

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July

which at the

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time saw the lower amount of sales in gold by nearly 100

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Dirhams

. As is shown by the graph, in August, the figure again experienced a significant

rose

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by 100

millions

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and

then

fall

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to the same amount.

Furthemore

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Furthermore

, from September to the end of the year,

trend

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was

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increased dramatically. Meanwhile, the

last

three months of the year had

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the same

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figures which

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were approximatelly

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approximatelly

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approximately

180 in October, 180 in November and around 200

millions

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of

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Dirhams

in December.