The line graph below shows the changes in the rate of sales of Gold in Dubai in one year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparison where relevant.
The graph illustrates the difference in the rate at which Gold was sold in Dubai in the year 2003 from January to December. It was measured in millions of Dirhams.
Overall
, the highest sales was
made in March Change the verb form
were
while
the lowest was
made in July and September. Correct subject-verb agreement
were
However
, It is seen that there was fluctuation across the year.
In January, 200millions
of Dirham Correct your spelling
200 million dollars
was
sold, it Correct subject-verb agreement
were
however
sharply increased to exactly 350milllion
in March before it dramatically declined to Correct your spelling
350 million
same
amount sold in January. There was a gradual decrement from slightly above 150million Dirham to almost 120million in July.
Change the article
the same
Furthermore
, there was a sharp increment of roughly 80million
followed by a reduction of the same amount in September, Correct your spelling
80 million
that is
, 80milllion
. The sales continued to increase steadily for the Correct your spelling
80 million
last
three consecutive years from about 180milllion
in October to almost Correct your spelling
180 million
Correct article usage
a 200million
200million
in December.Correct your spelling
200 million
Submitted by okoriej2 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
▼
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
▼