The line graph below shows the changes in the rate of sales of Gold in Dubai in one year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparison where relevant.

The line graph below shows the changes in the rate of sales of Gold in Dubai in one year. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparison where relevant.
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The line graph shows the rate of gold
price
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changes in Dubai in 2002.
Overall
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, the
price
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had fallen slightly despite showing a sharp increase in the middle of the
year
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. Looking at the details of each month of the
year
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beginning with January, the
price
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was
initially
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200 dirhams in millions showing a slight increase to around 225
million
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before a sharp rise in March
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2002. The
price
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in March was 350
million
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which was the highest
price
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throughout the
year
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. After that period the
price
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of gold decreased up until July when the
price
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became approximately 110
million
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.
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, for the next three years, it had been fluctuated till October and reached around 190
million
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and
then
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it hovered for the rest of the
year
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. From the graph, it can be seen that throughout the
year
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the
price
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fluctuated but the beginning and the end were pretty much the same.
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