The line graph below shows the changes in the rate of sales of Gold in Dubai in one year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparison where relevant.

The line graph below shows the changes in the rate of sales of Gold in Dubai in one year. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparison where relevant.
The graph illustrates the amount of
gold
sales in Dubai during the
year
.
Overall
, it could be seen that the peak of
gold
trading was in
March
. To begin with, at the start of the
year
sales were approximately 200
million
Dirhams
and
then
, within 2 months, the numbers reached the prime degree of realisation and raised roughly 150
million
cash.To put it in more precise terms, for every month, there were 200
million
Dirhams
from
gold
in January; 225
million
Dirhams
from
gold
in February; and 350
million
Dirhams
from
gold
in
March
. Interestingly, after aggressive growth until
March
, the sales met an unavoidable drop of approximately 225
million
dirhams
between
March
and July.
However
, after the month of August, the number is back to over 200
million
again, like at the start of the
year
.It
then
fluctuated over the
last
4 months of the
year
and ended the period slightly lower than where it began, at roughly 5
million
dirhams
.
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