The line graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph provides information regarding the percentage of three metals’ monthly changing
price
in 2014. Use synonyms
Overall
, the graph strongly fluctuated within a Linking Words
year
. It was specifically shown by nickel and zinc as they happened to Use synonyms
change
position Use synonyms
at the end
of the Linking Words
year
.
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Initially
, nickel emerged to be the highest Linking Words
change
compared to others. Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, it rapidly dropped to -3% in June, which is the lowest Linking Words
price
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change
in the Use synonyms
year
. Use synonyms
Then
, there was slight growth with a small dip in October, yet, Linking Words
at the end
of the Linking Words
year
it took the lowest position of 1%.
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By contrast
, zinc was the lowest at the beginning of the Linking Words
year
, but Use synonyms
then
it increased slightly to 3% in the next month. Linking Words
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the
next 8 months the Change preposition
in the
price
fell gradually, it exceeded the Use synonyms
change
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price
of nickel. In November, the Use synonyms
price
skyrocketed and kept growing surpassing 2%, which was the highest percentage in December.
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Lastly
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the cooper
cooper
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Cooper
price
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change
percentage did not really fluctuate. It showed some declines over the months until June, reaching approximately -0.5%. There was a constant in the next three months and started to grow in November and took the second place highest just as in the first month at the very end.Use synonyms
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