The line graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph provides information regarding the percentage of three metals’ monthly changing
price
in 2014. Overall
, the graph strongly fluctuated within a year
. It was specifically shown by nickel and zinc as they happened to change
position at the end
of the year
.
Initially
, nickel emerged to be the highest change
compared to others. Nevertheless
, it rapidly dropped to -3% in June, which is the lowest price
change
in the year
. Then
, there was slight growth with a small dip in October, yet, at the end
of the year
it took the lowest position of 1%.
By contrast
, zinc was the lowest at the beginning of the year
, but then
it increased slightly to 3% in the next month. Although
, the
next 8 months the Change preposition
in the
price
fell gradually, it exceeded the change
price
of nickel. In November, the price
skyrocketed and kept growing surpassing 2%, which was the highest percentage in December.
Lastly
, Correct article usage
the cooper
cooper
Capitalize word
Cooper
price
change
percentage did not really fluctuate. It showed some declines over the months until June, reaching approximately -0.5%. There was a constant in the next three months and started to grow in November and took the second place highest just as in the first month at the very end.Submitted by asyifannisakh on
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