Last week, you celebrated your birthday with some friends in a restaurant. It was a great success and you and your friends enjoyed yourselves very much. Write a letter to the restaurant. In your letter mention the food and service explain that you really enjoyed the atmosphere suggest any improvements to make things better You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

#week #birthday #friends #restaurant #success #food #service #atmosphere #improvements #addresses #sir #madam

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you today to express my gratitude, and thank you for

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amazing night that I spent with my friends at your restaurant.Allow me to elaborate.

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week,I celebrated my birthday with my friends, and it was breathtaking.We ordered a variety of seafood dishes

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rice and salad,all the ingredients were fresh and tasted really good.

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, the service was flawless,everything was served quickly and your staff took really good care of us and made all the arrangements to make us feel comfortable.

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,using our

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made the celebration unique.Honestly,

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is the first time I enjoyed celebrating my birthday that much owing to your service.

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,I would like to suggest some improvements that you could take into consideration.

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a lot of decorations in the place, which can be disturbing to some people, so I believe it is better to have simple things.

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, you already have an amazing view.

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, I noticed that the air conditioning was not working,and I think it is really important to keep the guests happy. I hope you will consider my suggestions and make those changes. Yours faithfully, Katty El.

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coherence cohesion

Expand on the explanation of the atmosphere to enhance coherence and cohesion.

task achievement

Ensure the letter fully addresses all parts of the prompt to achieve better task achievement.

lexical resource

Use a wider variety of vocabulary to improve the overall lexical resource.

grammatical range

Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and sentence structure for greater grammatical accuracy.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

192 words

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