Last week, you celebrated your birthday with some friends in a restaurant. It was a great success and you and your friends enjoyed yourselves very much. Write a letter to the restaurant. In your letter mention the food and service explain that you really enjoyed the atmosphere suggest any improvements to make things better You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you today to express my gratitude, and thank you for
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amazing night that I spent with my friends at your restaurant.Allow me to elaborate.
week,I celebrated my birthday with my friends, and it was breathtaking.We ordered a variety of seafood dishes
along with
rice and salad,all the ingredients were fresh and tasted really good.
, the service was flawless,everything was served quickly and your staff took really good care of us and made all the arrangements to make us feel comfortable.
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made the celebration unique.Honestly,
is the first time I enjoyed celebrating my birthday that much owing to your service.
,I would like to suggest some improvements that you could take into consideration.
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a lot of decorations in the place, which can be disturbing to some people, so I believe it is better to have simple things.
, you already have an amazing view.
, I noticed that the air conditioning was not working,and I think it is really important to keep the guests happy. I hope you will consider my suggestions and make those changes. Yours faithfully, Katty El.
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