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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification.

#university #students #subjects #addition #time #attention #qualification
Recently, there has
a
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debate about whether university
students
 should spend
time
on
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learning other
subjects
in addition
 to their main
subject
 or just
focusing
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focus
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 on their main
subject
. Some think that learning other
subjects
 will help
students
 gain more
skills
,
while
 others believe that
spend
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time
 on certain
thig
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things
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 is the only
wat
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way
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 to success.
First,
learning
other
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another subject
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subject
 can let
students
 have more than
one
skills
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skill
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. Nowadays, most companies will ask their employees to have more than
one
 profession because numerous jobs require multiple
skills
 to finish.
As a result
,
students
 who
has
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 more than
one
professions
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profession
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 will have more
adventages
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advantages
on
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in
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 looking for jobs.
Second,
learning more than
one
skills
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skill
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 is essential for a person to run a company. Starting a
bussiness
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business
 is a hard thing to do, but it is
also
 the fastest way to become
sucessful
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successful
. It is important for
emplyers
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employers
 to know what their
emplyees
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employees
 are doing, and it
require
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requires
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eployers
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employers
 to know more than
one
skills
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skill
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 to do
this
.
However
, I think it is better to focus on just
one
subject
. To start with,
students
 usually
have
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do have
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 not enough
time
 to master their main
subject
in
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at
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 the
unversity
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university
. If they spend their valuable
time
 on learning
other
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another subject
other subjects
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subject
, it may make them not doing well in all
subjects
 that they have learned. In the end, they will
became knowing
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become known
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everything
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for everything
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 but not good at anything.
Moreover
, focusing on learning
one
 main
subject
 is more
efficent
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efficient
 than learning a lot of different
subject
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subjects
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. Master a profession is not
a
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an
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 easy task, especially at the
beggining
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beginning
. Different
subjects
 need to learn in
different
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a different
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 way, so it makes learning another skill that people are not used to
became
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become
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 much harder than learning
skills
 that they already
has
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have
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 basic knowledge
.
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of.
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 To
sume
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sum
some
 up, some people think learning more than
one
subject
 will help
students
 to find jobs more easily and it is
also
 essential for
emplyer
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employees
 to have more than
one
skills
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skill
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.
On the other hand
, I believe
focusing
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in focusing
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 on
one
 major because
students
 usually
have
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do have
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 not enough
time
 to study and it is
also
 more
efficent
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efficient
.
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