The diagram below shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories. (Unpaid work refers to such activities as childcare in the home, housework and gardening.) Describe the information presented below, comparing results for men and women in the categories shown. Suggest reasons for what you see.
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The bar chart depicts the weekly
hours
spent by married men
and women
on chores work
. There are three
different categories of people, the ones without children
, with one or two children
or with more than three
.
Overall
, married women
are the ones who spend more time doing unpaid work
such
as childcare, gardening or housework. Women
who have more children
work
more hours
than those who don't have any. Meanwhile, men
spend around the same amount of time on such
chores with some variation in case of more then
Replace the word
than
three
children
.
In a child-free household or in one with no more than two, men
spend less than 20 hours
per week on unpaid work
. Surprisingly, the hours
decrese
for Correct your spelling
decrease
men
who have more than three
kids. In this
case, the
spend just over 15 Correct your spelling
they
hours
weekly on such
chores.
On the contrary
, this
number is always higher for women
who spend around 30 hours
per week working in the house even when they have no kids. This
number rises to over 50 hours
in a 1 to 2 children
household and jumps to 60 when there are more than three
children
in the house.Submitted by rizzi.flavia99 on
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