The charts below show the percentage of water u sed for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selectin

The charts below show the percentage of water u sed for different purposes in 

six areas of the world. 

Summarise the information by selectin
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The given pie chart illustrates the
percentage
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of
water
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used in different six areas of the world. Almost the pie chart
shown
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shows
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that
water
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used for domestic
purposes
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got the lowest
percentage
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, and most largest
percentage
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was for agricultural
purposes
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, like in Central
Asia
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, South East
Asia
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, Africa and South
America
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. Central
Asia
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has the greatest
number of
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apply
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percentage
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which
was
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is
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88%. It’s very different in Europe, they used more
water
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for industrial
purposes
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than for agriculture
by
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with
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53%. If we look
on
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at
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Africa, they got 84% of agricultural
water
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purposes
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that’s
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which
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mean
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Africa was in second place after Central
Asia
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.
Then
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we check for
America
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, between North and South have the different
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percentage
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percentages
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. South
America
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has 71% for agricultural
use
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and just 10% for industrial
use
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,
while
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North
America
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just
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has just
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39%
of
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for
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agicultural
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agricultural
use
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and 48%
fot
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for
industrial
use
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.
Overall
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, the majority of
water
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use
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was for agricultural
purposes
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.
However
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, for continents
were
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apply
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containing developed
counties
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countries
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like Europe and North
America
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the
water
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uses
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is used
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more for Industrial
purposes
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.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, water, purposes, asia, america, use with synonyms.
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