The charts below show the percentage of water u sed for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selectin
The given pie chart illustrates the
percentage
of water
used in different six areas of the world. Almost the pie chart shown
that Wrong verb form
shows
water
used for domestic purposes
got the lowest percentage
, and most largest percentage
was for agricultural purposes
, like in Central Asia
, South East Asia
, Africa and South America
. Central Asia
has the greatest number of
Correct quantifier usage
apply
percentage
which was
88%. It’s very different in Europe, they used more Wrong verb form
is
water
for industrial purposes
than for agriculture by
53%.
If we look Change preposition
with
on
Africa, they got 84% of agricultural Change preposition
at
water
purposes
that’s
Verb problem
which
mean
Africa was in second place after Central Replace the word
means
Asia
. Then
we check for America
, between North and South have the different percentage
. South Fix the agreement mistake
percentages
America
has 71% for agricultural use
and just 10% for industrial use
, while
North America
just
39% Add a missing verb
has just
of
Change preposition
for
agicultural
Correct your spelling
agricultural
use
and 48% fot
industrial Correct your spelling
for
use
.
Overall
, the majority of water
use
was for agricultural purposes
. However
, for continents were
containing developed Unnecessary verb
apply
counties
like Europe and North Correct your spelling
countries
America
the water
uses
more for Industrial Wrong verb form
is used
purposes
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