The graphs below show four categories of citrus fruits and the top three countries to which these were exported (in thousand tonnes) in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show four categories of citrus fruits and the top three countries to

which these were exported (in thousand tonnes) in 2012. Summarise the information

by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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Four bar graphs provide information on four sections of fruits by comparing the top three importer nations in 2012, measured in thousand tonnes.
Overall
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, Mexico dominated the markets of
lemons
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and other kinds of citrus commodities,
while
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oranges and grapefruits' unique popular destinations were South Africa and Turkey.
Firstly
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, South Africa notably bought 1.000 oranges, followed by Egypt at half that number, and closed with the United States' import which was slightly lower than the second nation's point.
Secondly
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, both
lemons
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and uncategorized products were sent to Mexico at approximately 500 pieces for each category. The States came second in buying
lemons
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by 200 fruits and third in terms of others with the same number as Egypt where both were barely above par.
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, Argentina was only present in
lemons
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trading with around half of America's number.
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, the grapefruits were the only commodity with the exact point of trade records for each country. It was topped by Turkey with 400 fruits, tailed by Mexico and the USA with a mere 100 and 200 for each product in a particular order.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words lemons with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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