The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line
chart
and pie chart
illustrate the previous year's data on criminal activities in the UK
.
Overall
, most crimes
in the UK
were committed by people of age
ranging from 12 to 24. Moreover
, among different types of criminal acts, criminals chose to conduct violent ones more than any other crimes
in the past year.
From the first chart
, it is clear that
crimes
were committed mostly by young people in the UK
. Children less than 8 years old were innocent, whereas
persons with ages more than 8 but less than 12 were slightly involved in these activities. After the age
of 12, the crime
rate rocketed from less than 10 to 70 and then
, it culminated at 80 at age
20. However
, after 20 years old, the trend went downward as the respective figures for the ages 24 and 28 were 60 and 20, respectively and it continued until the age
of 60.
On the other chart
, the type, violent was in the first position with 46% of all crimes
that occurred in the UK
last
year. Then
, property crime
and drug crime
were almost similar with 23% and 22%, respectively. Lastly
, public order crime
was not very famous among criminals as it was counted as only 9% of total crimes
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Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, uk, crimes, age, crime with synonyms.
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