The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line

chart

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and pie

chart

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illustrate the previous year's data on criminal activities in the

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Overall

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, most

crimes

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in the

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were committed by people of

age

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ranging from 12 to 24.

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, among different types of criminal acts, criminals chose to conduct violent ones more than any other

crimes

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in the past year. From the first

chart

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it is clear that

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crimes

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were committed mostly by young people in the

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. Children less than 8 years old were innocent,

whereas

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persons with ages more than 8 but less than 12 were slightly involved in these activities. After the

age

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of 12, the

crime

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rate rocketed from less than 10 to 70 and

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, it culminated at 80 at

age

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20.

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, after 20 years old, the trend went downward as the respective figures for the ages 24 and 28 were 60 and 20, respectively and it continued until the

age

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of 60. On the other

chart

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, the type, violent was in the first position with 46% of all

crimes

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that occurred in the

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last

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year.

Then

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, property

crime

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and drug

crime

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were almost similar with 23% and 22%, respectively.

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, public order

crime

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was not very famous among criminals as it was counted as only 9% of total

crimes

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.

Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, uk, crimes, age, crime with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

213 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

The line graph depicts
The pie chart illustrates
reveals
displays
depicts
the trend of
the overall crime rate
steadily decreased
the distribution of
different types of crime
prevalent
accounts for
the most common crime
followed by
make up
a smaller proportion of
the total crimes
a smaller percentage
approximately
the remaining percentage
It is important to note that
reflects

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