The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line
chart
and pie
chart
illustrate the previous year's data on criminal activities in the
UK
.
Overall
, most
crimes
in the
UK
were committed by people of
age
ranging from 12 to 24.
Moreover
, among different types of criminal acts, criminals chose to conduct violent ones more than any other
crimes
in the past year. From the first
chart
,
it is clear that
crimes
were committed mostly by young people in the
UK
. Children less than 8 years old were innocent,
whereas
persons with ages more than 8 but less than 12 were slightly involved in these activities. After the
age
of 12, the
crime
rate rocketed from less than 10 to 70 and
then
, it culminated at 80 at
age
20.
However
, after 20 years old, the trend went downward as the respective figures for the ages 24 and 28 were 60 and 20, respectively and it continued until the
age
of 60. On the other
chart
, the type, violent was in the first position with 46% of all
crimes
that occurred in the
UK
last
year.
Then
, property
crime
and drug
crime
were almost similar with 23% and 22%, respectively.
Lastly
, public order
crime
was not very famous among criminals as it was counted as only 9% of total
crimes
.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, uk, crimes, age, crime with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • The line graph depicts
  • The pie chart illustrates
  • reveals
  • displays
  • depicts
  • the trend of
  • the overall crime rate
  • steadily decreased
  • the distribution of
  • different types of crime
  • prevalent
  • accounts for
  • the most common crime
  • followed by
  • make up
  • a smaller proportion of
  • the total crimes
  • a smaller percentage
  • approximately
  • the remaining percentage
  • It is important to note that
  • reflects
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