The chart below gives information on the birth rate among women in England, from 1973 to 2020. The figures are measured in births per 1000 women.
The line chart compares
women
's birth rates in England between 1973 and 2020.
Overall
, women
aged 20 to 25 have an
decreasing trend, Change the article
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whereas
childbirth rates of those who are 28 to 34 years old have increased by the end of the period. Furthermore
, females who are under 20 and over 40, show similar statistics that only slightly changed during the years.
To begin
, in 1973, it was quite popular to give birth being
aged 20 to 25, at 120000 Unnecessary verb
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women
, going down to 80000 in 1993 and eventually to just under 20000 in 2008. After that, the number had slighly
dropped to 20000, representing the same number as for Correct your spelling
slightly
women
who are under 20 by 2020. Initially
the figure for those who were 28 to 34 was just 20(in 1973) leaping to around 45, finilising at 80 in 2020.
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Initially,
On the other hand
, for those who were aged 40, delivering children was not a popular procedure, starting with about 150000 in 1973 gradually
lowering to slightly above zero in 2020. Correct word choice
and gradually
Similarly
, in 1973, only 20000 females who are
under 20 experienced childbirth (accounting for the same number as for those who were 28 to 34 years old) declining to just under 20 in 2001, and moving back to 20 in 2020.Wrong verb form
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