The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years

The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years
The charts illustrate how much
energy
was produced in 1995 and 2005 in France.
Overall
, coal
production
was the highest not only in the year 1995 but
also
in 2005,
whereas
gas was the second most
energy
production
.
On the other hand
, the category labelled 'other'
was
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the lowest
energy
in terms of productivity. In 1995, coal accounted for the largest amount of
energy
production
at 29.80%,
while
gas was lower at 29.63% and was as equal as petrol at 29.27%. Nuclear power
production
also
stood at just over 6% and other
energy
production
was the lowest at nearly 5%. In 2005, the
production
of coal and gas increased minimally by 0.68 and 1.13, respectively.
In addition
, the proportion of petrol
production
saw a gradual decline from 29.27 to 19.55. It is worth noting that, there was a dramatic growth of approximately 4% in the figure for both nuclear power and the category labelled 'other'.
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