The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years

The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years
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The charts illustrate how much
energy
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was produced in 1995 and 2005 in France.
Overall
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, coal
production
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was the highest not only in the year 1995 but
also
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in 2005,
whereas
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gas was the second most
energy
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production
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.
On the other hand
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, the category labelled 'other'
was
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the lowest
energy
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in terms of productivity. In 1995, coal accounted for the largest amount of
energy
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production
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at 29.80%,
while
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gas was lower at 29.63% and was as equal as petrol at 29.27%. Nuclear power
production
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also
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stood at just over 6% and other
energy
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production
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was the lowest at nearly 5%. In 2005, the
production
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of coal and gas increased minimally by 0.68 and 1.13, respectively.
In addition
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, the proportion of petrol
production
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saw a gradual decline from 29.27 to 19.55. It is worth noting that, there was a dramatic growth of approximately 4% in the figure for both nuclear power and the category labelled 'other'.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, production with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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