The line graph shows the percentage change in taxation and available credit. The bar chart illustrates the development of spending in 3 industries of UK citizens.

The line graph shows the percentage change in taxation and available credit. The bar chart illustrates the development of spending in 3 industries of UK citizens.
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The line graph shows the percentage change in taxation and available
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. The bar chart illustrates the development of spending in 3 industries of UK citizens. The data was taken from 1990 to 2010 with 5-year intervals.
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, there are 2 correlations that could have been present: a negative relationship between the consumer
credit
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and rates of taxation and a positive correlation between the
credit
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and the spending of the consumers. Between the
years
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1990 and 1995, the available
credit
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skyrocketed by 30%, followed by an insignificant decrease of around 10% in the next 5
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. By 2005, the
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had increased dramatically once again, reaching its peak of being 50% larger in comparison to its amount in 1990.
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, the rate of taxation had experienced a reverse pattern,
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, in 2005 it had reached the lowest value of it being 30 per cent smaller
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than in 1990. Between the
years
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1990 and 1995 the spending on all industries, especially on appliances, had increased. These values dipped by the year 2000, after which had doubled, tripled or even quadrupled by the year 2005, reaching their peak, after which plummeted back in the course of the next 5
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