The chart below shows the percentage of household in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 to 2011
The provided bar chart depicts the comparison of buying or renting
house
in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.
In 1918, the rented household was raised about 78%. Fix the agreement mistake
houses
Then
it levelled off between 1939 to 1953. From 1961 to 1981 it dramatically dropped to 35%. This
accommodation stayed the same until 2001. In 2011, there was a slight increase in rented household
and it was up to 38%.
The same year the owned ones Fix the agreement mistake
households
has
raised from 21% to 32% in 1918 to 1953. Change the verb form
have
In
1939 to 1953 there was a gradual state in the percentage. Change preposition
From
Then
it starts to levelled
up to 69% in 1991. Change the verb
level
At
2001 to 2011 there was a decline in the owned accommodation and it was 62%.
Generally, both Change preposition
From
of
Change preposition
apply
the
rented and owned household has Correct article usage
apply
raised
and dropped Verb problem
risen
though
the years from 1918 to 2011. There was a year that the percentage Correct your spelling
through
were
the same and it was 1971 which was 50%Change the verb form
was
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