The chart below shows the percentage of household in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 to 2011

The chart below shows the percentage of household in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 to 2011
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in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011. In 1918, the rented household was raised about 78%.
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it levelled off between 1939 to 1953. From 1961 to 1981 it dramatically dropped to 35%.
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accommodation stayed the same until 2001. In 2011, there was a slight increase in rented
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and it was up to 38%. The same year the owned ones
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raised from 21% to 32% in 1918 to 1953.
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1939 to 1953 there was a gradual state in the percentage.
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up to 69% in 1991.
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2001 to 2011 there was a decline in the owned accommodation and it was 62%. Generally, both
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rented and owned household has
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and dropped
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the years from 1918 to 2011. There was a year that the percentage
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the same and it was 1971 which was 50%
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