The charts Below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the word. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons were relevant.

The charts Below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the word. 

summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons were relevant.
The pie chart represents information about the proportion of people in six places around the world who use water.
Overall
, it can be seen that there are six areas North
America
, South
America
, Europe, Africa, Central
Asia
and Southeast
Asia
.
In addition
, there are three things to use water
such
as industrial, agricultural and domestic.
To begin
with, in three areas Africa, Central
Asia
and South East
Asia
using water for agriculture
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than 80 per
cent
and
this
is the highest percentage in the three areas.
In contrast
, industrial, agricultural and domestic were not more than 12 per
cent
. For North
America
and Europe, the highest was industrial about 53 per
cent
and 43 per
cent
respectively.
On the other hand
, South
America
was
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only 10 per
cent
of industrial, but the highest was agricultural.
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