The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry sectors' contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016.
The two pie charts display the difference in contribution
in
per cent of eight industrial sectors which developed Change preposition
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on
Turkey's recession in 2000 and 2016.
In general, The major Change preposition
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industy
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industry
of
2000 year was Agriculture, but in 2016 Health and Education became the most developing sector, Change preposition
in
while
the minor sector of 2000 and 2016 was Construction and
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& Business
sectors Correct your spelling
and business
raspectively
.
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respectively
To begin
with, the most income of
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from
Turkey
government in the 2000s was gained from Agriculture Leisure & Hospitality and Education & Business spheres, as the data which was collected Change noun form
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in
2000s
year showed 24%, 17% and 17%, sincerely. Correct article usage
the 2000s
On the other
hand
the least significant economic sectors were Construction (5%), Finance & Business (Add a comma
hand,
also
5%) and Manufacturing (8%).
By 2016, analyzing the scheme, it can be
noticed that agriculture lost 10% of Verb problem
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income
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its income
the
Health Correct article usage
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& Education
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and education
become
the most wealthy sector, as its output was 17% Wrong verb form
became
to
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of
country's
economy.Correct article usage
the country's
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