The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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the bar diagram illustrates the export income of one country in five different categories during the period from 2015 to 2016, the table gives information about the change in product value percentages in 2016 in comparison to 2015.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the value of all consumer goods rose except for gems and jewellery.
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, there were no significant increases or decreases, not including textiles. In 2015, the biggest earnings from exports were made by petroleum products, which accounted for about 6 billion dollars. In the following year, income from sales of gasoline grew by 3
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and kept the position of the product that made the most profit.
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, it is noticeable that the money amounts profited by gems and jewellery in both years were almost equal; there was only a small difference of 0.81%. The biggest change in values that happened over the entire period was an increase of 15.24% in textile goods. Before an upward trend, financial funds’ amount from textile sales accounted for approximately 25.000.000.000 USD.
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Vocabulary: The word "amounts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • export value
  • economic sector
  • percentage change
  • increment
  • decrement
  • fluctuation
  • trend analysis
  • year-on-year comparison
  • significant growth/decline
  • stagnation
  • market dynamics
  • fiscal repercussions
  • trade balance
  • competitive advantage
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