You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words.
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The graphs show a variety of working
adults
Change noun form
adults'
adult's
activities
and proportion
of Correct article usage
the proportion
time
for each activity
in 1958 and 2008. Overall
, the main activities
in both years remained steady the biggest, including working and sleeping groups. Otherwise
the percentage
of "going
out" group decreased dramatically, Correct article usage
the "going
while
part of “travel to work” went up.
The most obvious trend in the charts is that the working and sleeping activities
have the biggest part. Despite slightly increasing time
spent on working activity
from 33% in 1958 to 42% in 2008, it is still the main part of pie charts. Decreasing percentage
of Add an article
the percentage
time
for sleeping activity
doesn’t changed
the main trend, and Change the verb form
change
this
group is still one of the biggest.
On the other hand
, the proportion of ‘going out’ activity
fell a little. It declined by 6% from 1958 to 2008, Percentage
of time
for ‘travel to work’ grew slightly from 2 in 1958 to 8 in 2008.
To summarise, the proportion of time
adults spent
on Wrong verb form
spend
variety
Correct article usage
a variety
activities
Change preposition
of activities
doesn’t
changed a lot through the years. The Verb problem
hasn’t
percentage
of time
working adults spent on going out and travel
to work Wrong verb form
travelling
is
changed gradually from 1958 to 2008.Unnecessary verb
apply
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Vocabulary: Replace the words activities, time, activity, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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