You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words.

The graphs show a variety of working

adults

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adults'

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activities

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and

proportion

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the proportion

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of

time

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for each

activity

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in 1958 and 2008.

Overall

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, the main

activities

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in both years remained steady the biggest, including working and sleeping groups.

Otherwise

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the

percentage

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of

"going

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the "going

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out" group decreased dramatically,

while

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part of “travel to work” went up. The most obvious trend in the charts is that the working and sleeping

activities

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have the biggest part. Despite slightly increasing

time

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spent on working

activity

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from 33% in 1958 to 42% in 2008, it is still the main part of pie charts. Decreasing

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percentage

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the percentage

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of

time

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for sleeping

activity

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doesn’t

changed

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the main trend, and

this

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group is still one of the biggest.

On the other hand

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, the proportion of ‘going out’

activity

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fell a little. It declined by 6% from 1958 to 2008,

Percentage

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of

time

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for ‘travel to work’ grew slightly from 2 in 1958 to 8 in 2008. To summarise, the proportion of

time

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adults

spent

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spend

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on

variety

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a variety

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activities

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of activities

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doesn’t

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hasn’t

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changed a lot through the years. The

percentage

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of

time

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working adults spent on going out and

travel

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travelling

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to work

is

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apply

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changed gradually from 1958 to 2008.