The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production in a country in two years

The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production in a country in two years
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The diagrams demonstrate the differences between
energy
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consumption proportions from distinct sources in France in 1995 and 2005.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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Coal was the most famous
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generator.
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,
while
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coal, Gas, Nuclear and other sources were used more for
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production, the figure for Petro dwindled. Focusing on the year 1995, Coal was utilized the most for
energy
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production with a perception of 29.8.
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, Gas stood in the second place for the same count with 29.63% of all.
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, we have petro resources which were 29.27% used in the same year and
lastly
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, Nuclear and other sources were consumed the least at just under 10 per cent. Moving on to 2005,
although
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coal and gas stayed at the top for
energy
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-related consumption, Petro was less famous
this
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year at approximately 20 per cent.
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, Nuclear and other resources accumulated slightly to just nearly 10 per cent.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy with synonyms.
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