The line graph shows the proportion of students aged 18-25 studying in the universities of Singapore, Malaysia, Philippines and Thailand from 1961 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph compares the
percentage
of college students
, aged between 18 and 25 years old, in Singapore
, Malaysia
, Philippines
and Thailand from 1961 to 2011.
Correct article usage
the Philippines
Overall
, it is true that the percentage
of students
in Malaysia
and Philippines
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the Philippines
have
a stable increase during the period shown. Correct subject-verb agreement
has
In contrast
, the figures from Singapore
and Thailand have changed constantly over the 50-year period.
In 1961, Thailand had the highest percentage
of young people who went to university, with almost 25% of the population; despite it fell to nearly 20% after ten years. On the other hand
, figures from Singapore
and Malaysia
tended to rise: Singapore
had initially
15% but doubled the percentage
in the next decade; and Malaysia
had the lowest number of people who went to university, with approximately 3% and rose to 10% in 1971. However
, there remain stable in Correct article usage
the Philipines
Philipines
, with 7% of the Correct your spelling
Philippines
students
.
All these four countries reached their peak in 2011, with their highest percentage
of students
. Malaysia
have increased significantly over the period reaching 20% in 2011, and Philippines
have Correct article usage
the Philippines
also
risen despite remaining steady in the first decade and after 1991 at 15%. In regard to the other two, have increased and decreased over the 50 years, but both achieved their highest percentage
in 2011, with almost 40%.Submitted by rachel131 on
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