The line graph shows the proportion of students aged 18-25 studying in the universities of Singapore, Malaysia, Philippines and Thailand from 1961 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the proportion of
university
students
aged 18-25 in four different countries such
as Singapore
, Malaysia
, Philippines, and Thailand
from 1961 to 2011.
Overview, Universities in Singapore
and Thailand
were more attended by their citizens than citizens in Malaysia
and the Philippines. In Singapore
, the number
of students
was more fluctuating for the given periods rather than the other three.
In 1971, the number
of people who pursued higher education in Singapore
were
highly increased by 15% increased. Malaysians who entered Change the verb form
was
university
also
increased by approximately 7%. Meanwhile, both countries were experiencing an upward trend, Thailand
was facing a downward trend which resulted in just over 20% of the youngsters in Thailand
pursuing a degree. In the next ten years, it was noticeable that only Singapore
was experiencing a fall with 5% fewer university
students
compared to 1971. On the other hand
, the Younger generations in Malaysia
, the Philippines, and Thailand
who pursued higher education slightly increased.
From the year 1991, young people in Thailand
that
attended Correct pronoun usage
who
university
grew sharply until 2011 there were over 40% of university
students
in Thailand
. This
also
means that Thailand
was the country with the most number
of students
. Singaporeans who attended university
also
escalated slightly and by 2011 there were 40% of their younger generations were in university
. In contrast
, Malaysia
was the only country with no further
additions to the number
of students
with only 15% from 1991 to 2011.Submitted by lavenia34808 on
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