The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production in a country in two years

The pie charts compare the different types of energy manufacture in a nation over a period of 10 years (1995-2005).

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, the amount of gas, coal, and

petro

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petrol

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up the highest proportion.

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,

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the percentage of nuclear and the other powers

production

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account for slightly small. In 1995,

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coal

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made up the largest proportion, at 29.8% and increased minimally in 2005

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up around 31% of the total

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amount of energy

manufactured

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small increase in the

production

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of Gas from 29.3% to more than 30% during the period shown.

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, the figure for the generation of petro was around 30%

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but decreased significantly to around 20% in 2005. Turning to the remaining powers we can see that, the

production

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of nuclear

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rose

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from 6.4% in 1995 to more than 10% in 10 years later. The figure

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other power produced climbed twice times to around 9% over 10 years.