The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The column graph compares the proportion of both genders doing exercises normally in Australia with six
age
brackets in 2010.
Overall
, the two younger age
groups had larger participants which had more men and less women than those of the four older ones.
Among six age
groups, the figure for people aged from 15 to 24 working out was the highest which was significantly larger than that of people who were between 25 and 3. Similarly
, the former had the largest data on men, with 52.8% was 5 % than that of women in both categories and 10% higher than the one in the latter.
However
, more than half of females participated in physical activities in the three following older age
brackets which was more than the figure for males, accounting for 39.5%, 43.1%, and 45.1% respectively. A noticeable feature was that the data for men and women aged more than 65 years old were nearly equal, occupying approximately 47%.Submitted by kimhoa01679396246 on
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