the table below shows information and prediction regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries
The table illustrates the proportion of
population
aged 65 and above by providing the change of the information and predictions in Add an article
the population
Canada
, Germany
, and the UK
in forty two
years.
Add a hyphen
forty-two
Overall
, the proportion of residents aged 65 and above in three countries is predicted to increase with Germany
standing first over the period given.
In 1988, the highest percentage was reported in Germany
followed by Canada
, with the former at 20.45% and the latter at 16.32%. Meanwhile, the number in the UK
only reached 14.23%.
Germany
also
had the highest share in 2000 (25.32%) as opposed to the least which was the UK
(14.89%). Canada
, however
, was responsible for 20.67%.
The proportion of the population aged 65 and above is expected to expand in 2030 with Germany
will rank first at 30.42% while
Canada
and the UK
will be
anticipated above 20% respectively.Wrong verb form
are
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