the table below shows information and prediction regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries

the table below shows information and prediction regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries
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The table illustrates the proportion of
population
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the population
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aged 65 and above by providing the change of the information and predictions in
Canada
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,
Germany
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, and the
UK
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in
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years.
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, the proportion of residents aged 65 and above in three countries is predicted to increase with
Germany
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standing first over the period given. In 1988, the highest percentage was reported in
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followed by
Canada
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, with the former at 20.45% and the latter at 16.32%. Meanwhile, the number in the
UK
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only reached 14.23%.
Germany
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had the highest share in 2000 (25.32%) as opposed to the least which was the
UK
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(14.89%).
Canada
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,
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, was responsible for 20.67%. The proportion of the population aged 65 and above is expected to expand in 2030 with
Germany
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will rank first at 30.42%
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and the
UK
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anticipated above 20% respectively.
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