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The table below shows information and predictons regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries

The table below shows information and predictons regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries
#information #predictons #change #percentage #population #three #countries
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illustrate
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 the information and predictions
according
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 the transformation in
percentage
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the percentage
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 of the elderly demography in
Canada
, Germany, and British in the period given.
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, both countries (
Canada
 and Germany)
was in
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 the highest
percentage
 of the
population
 aged 65 and above from 1988 to 2030
instead
 of
UK
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the UK
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 which in the lowest
percentage
over
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the
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apply
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1988 to 2030.
Canada
 has become one of the
country
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 that has increased
it’s
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 age
population
 from 16.32% to 20.67% in 1988 and 2000 respectively. And will be predicted
t0
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to
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 up 26.35% in 2030.
While
, the
British’s
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Population
 remained steadily from 14.23% to 14.89% in 1988 and 2000 but increased to 20.35%
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three decades later
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. The most noticeable changes
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 in Germany,
which
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where
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 the
percentage
 of the elderly
population
 was
onward
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the onward
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 direction
in
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fivefold rather than
Canada
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in Canada
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 and
UK
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the UK
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 with 20.45%, 25.32%, and 30.42% respectively
during
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from
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 1988 until 2030.
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Contractions: Don't use contractions.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, canada, population with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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