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The tables below give information about the production and consumption of coffee in 2017 and 2018 in five coffee-exporting countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about the production and consumption of coffee in 2017 and 2018 in five coffee-exporting countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The tables illustrate how much the five
coffee
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-exporting countries produced and consumed
coffee
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 in terms of the number of
coffee
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bags
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 in 2017 and 2018.
Overall
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, it is evident that
Brazil
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 persisted as the most predominant
coffee
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-producing nation in both years, followed by Vietnam.
In addition
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, Brazilians spent the most in the consumption ranking, with second place taken by Indonesia. The table details reveal that 52.7
million
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bags
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 were produced in
Brazil
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 in 2017,
while
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 40.5
million
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 in Vietnam. Columbia and Indonesia produced only one-fourth to one-fifth of
Brazil
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's, and Mexico ranked at the bottom with 4.4
million
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bags
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. In 2018, only Brazilian
coffee
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 experienced a drastic increase, reaching an output of 61.7
million
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bags
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. Shifting our focus to
coffee
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 consumption, Brazilians were still the most ardent
coffee
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 drinkers; they consumed 21.2
million
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bags
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 in 2017. Indonesia was the second-highest
coffee
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 consumer, albeit with a minor figure of 4.7
million
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bags
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. Other countries reported only diminutive shares, with 2.4
million
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bags
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 in Mexico and Vietnam and 1.7
million
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 in Columbia. In the subsequent year,
coffee
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 consumption in most countries remained relatively unchanged, except for
Brazil
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, climbing to 22.0
million
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bags
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 in 2018.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, bags, brazil, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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