The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
the diagram highlights the process by which
coffee
is manufactured and ready to be sale
in local or supermarkets. there are eleven steps in the process from picking the Replace the word
sold
beans
to producing a nice cup of coffee
after plucking the coffee
beans
from the leaves after
cutting their stem. Correct word choice
and
then
, the coffee
seeds are swon
by the farmer that needs the sun Correct your spelling
sown
sworn
lightlight
to dry them the following step, is to roast the Correct your spelling
light light
highlight
light-light
beans
under a container
to peel of
their skin after that, it Replace the word
off
pass
Change the verb form
passes
to
a cool Change preposition
into
container
that instantly make
the Change the verb form
makes
Correct your spelling
coffee
coffe
Correct your spelling
coffee
beans
cooler the next step, is to grind them into pieces before poured into hot water
respectively
furthermore
, after the beans
put
into hot Add a missing verb
are put
water
it then
strain
out with the type of equipment that Wrong verb form
strained
separate
them from Correct subject-verb agreement
separates
water
Add an article
the water
following
this
, the strainer beans
of mixture
are Add an article
the mixture
a mixture
then
put into cool
freezer which is again ready to Correct article usage
a cool
be grind
off but, Change the verb form
be ground
this
time it will be frozen state after which, it pass to a vacuum container
to evaporate the water
finally
, the mixture of seeds are ready to be put into pack of jars which ready to be delivered to the super markets
Correct your spelling
supermarkets
overall
, it is vividly manifested that the production of coffee
beans
contain
many steps from picking the Correct subject-verb agreement
contains
beans
to heat
them in a Wrong verb form
heating
container
and after that grind
them into pieces which Wrong verb form
grinding
is
ready to be soldCorrect subject-verb agreement
are
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, beans, container, water with synonyms.
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