The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

the diagram highlights the process by which

coffee

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is manufactured and ready to be

sale

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sold

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in local or supermarkets. there are eleven steps in the process from picking the

beans

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to producing a nice cup of

coffee

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after plucking the

coffee

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beans

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from the leaves

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and

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cutting their stem.

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, the

coffee

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seeds are

swon

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sown

sworn

by the farmer that needs the sun

lightlight

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light light

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to dry them the following step, is to roast the

beans

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under a

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to peel

of

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off

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their skin after that, it

pass

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passes

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to

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into

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a cool

container

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that instantly

make

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makes

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the

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coffee

coffe

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coffee

beans

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cooler the next step, is to grind them into pieces before poured into hot

water

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respectively

furthermore

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, after the

beans

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put

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into hot

water

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it

then

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strain

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strained

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out with the type of equipment that

separate

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separates

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them from

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water

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the water

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following

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this

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, the strainer

beans

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of

mixture

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the mixture

a mixture

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are

then

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put into

cool

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a cool

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freezer which is again ready to

be grind

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be ground

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off but,

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time it will be frozen state after which, it pass to a vacuum

container

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to evaporate the

water

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finally

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, the mixture of seeds are ready to be put into pack of jars which ready to be delivered to the

super markets

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supermarkets

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overall

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, it is vividly manifested that the production of

coffee

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beans

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contain

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contains

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many steps from picking the

beans

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to

heat

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heating

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them in a

container

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and after that

grind

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grinding

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them into pieces which

is

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are

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ready to be sold