The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
the diagram highlights the process by which
coffee
is manufactured and ready to be
sale
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sold
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in local or supermarkets. there are eleven steps in the process from picking the
beans
to producing a nice cup of
coffee
after plucking the
coffee
beans
from the leaves
after
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and
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cutting their stem.
then
, the
coffee
seeds are
swon
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sown
sworn
by the farmer that needs the sun
lightlight
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light light
highlight
light-light
to dry them the following step, is to roast the
beans
under a
container
to peel
of
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their skin after that, it
pass
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to
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into
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a cool
container
that instantly
make
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the
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coffee
coffe
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coffee
beans
cooler the next step, is to grind them into pieces before poured into hot
water
respectively
furthermore
, after the
beans
put
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into hot
water
it
then
strain
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out with the type of equipment that
separate
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separates
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them from
water
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the water
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following
this
, the strainer
beans
of
mixture
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the mixture
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are
then
put into
cool
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a cool
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freezer which is again ready to
be grind
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be ground
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off but,
this
time it will be frozen state after which, it pass to a vacuum
container
to evaporate the
water
finally
, the mixture of seeds are ready to be put into pack of jars which ready to be delivered to the
super markets
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supermarkets
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overall
, it is vividly manifested that the production of
coffee
beans
contain
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contains
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many steps from picking the
beans
to
heat
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heating
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them in a
container
and after that
grind
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grinding
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them into pieces which
is
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are
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ready to be sold
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