The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram demonstrates the way in which geothermal energy is used to generate electricity.
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, the process
divided
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is divided
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inti
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into
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five different parts: pumping cold
water
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underground, heating it,
pump
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pumping
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hot
water
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to the surface, converting it into steam and using the
steamd
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steam
steamed
to turn the turbines to create electricity. First of all, stored cold
water
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in the container
pumped
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down to the injection well
that is
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4,5 km deep beneath the earth’s surface.
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, the well injects the
water
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into the geothermal zone where the
water
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is heated by hot rocks. After that, the hot
water
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in the geothermal zone enters the production well and
pumped
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up through the condenser. The heated
water
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is
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is subsequently turned
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subsequently
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turns into steam in the condenser by lowering the
water
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’s pressure. Later, the steam passes the turbine and powers it by rotating its blades and
moves
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through the generator.
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, the spinning turbine powers the generator and produces electricity.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • geothermal energy
  • renewable source
  • sustainable
  • drilling wells
  • hot water and steam
  • drive turbines
  • generate electricity
  • conversion
  • cooling process
  • re-injected
  • efficiency
  • environmental impact
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