The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram demonstrates the way in which geothermal energy is used to generate electricity.
Overall
, the process Linking Words
divided
Add a missing verb
is divided
inti
five different parts: pumping cold Correct your spelling
into
water
underground, heating it, Use synonyms
pump
hot Wrong verb form
pumping
water
to the surface, converting it into steam and using the Use synonyms
steamd
to turn the turbines to create electricity.
First of all, stored cold Correct your spelling
steam
steamed
water
in the container Use synonyms
pumped
down to the injection well Add a missing verb
is pumped
that is
4,5 km deep beneath the earth’s surface. Linking Words
Then
, the well injects the Linking Words
water
into the geothermal zone where the Use synonyms
water
is heated by hot rocks. After that, the hot Use synonyms
water
in the geothermal zone enters the production well and Use synonyms
pumped
up through the condenser.
The heated Add a missing verb
is pumped
water
Use synonyms
is
Change the verb form
is subsequently turned
is subsequently turning
subsequently
turns into steam in the condenser by lowering the Linking Words
water
’s pressure. Later, the steam passes the turbine and powers it by rotating its blades and Use synonyms
moves
through the generator. Wrong verb form
moving
Finally
, the spinning turbine powers the generator and produces electricity.Linking Words
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