Directors large organisations earn much higher salaries than ordinary employees. Some people think it is necessary, but others believe that it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Chief executive officers get a bulk amount of hike than normal
workers
in all organisations not only the corporate companies
but also
the small firms too. Some think that more salary
provides
to the Wrong verb form
provided
directors
are
not obligatory, Correct subject-verb agreement
is
however
, others believe that management workers
get excessive hikes
from the company and this
is fair
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a fair
decision
. This
essay will discuss both these beliefs and state the writers' opinion for why CEO
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CEOs
much
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a higher
salary
than employees
.
On the one hand, employers can earn much
hike and Correct article usage
a much
this
is a fair decision
because they do a
plenty of Remove the article
apply
work
in firms such
as management work
. Management job is not easy, the mangers
or Correct your spelling
managers
directors
are the
responsible for the whole enterprise, Correct article usage
apply
they
have to improvise and enhance the Correct word choice
and they
companies
towards profits and productivity. Fix the agreement mistake
company
For instance
, the directors
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director's
directors'
work
is a
double Correct article usage
apply
work
as compared to the workers
which is they work
for companies
as well as
workers
, so the directors
should get more earnings
than noraml
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normal
employees
. Therefore
, the manegers
can Correct your spelling
managers
be gotten
more Wrong verb form
get
hikes
likewise
more Correct word choice
and likewise
work
high salary
.
On the other hand
, the administrative officers
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officer's
officers'
work
is a managemerial
job, they do not do Correct your spelling
managerial
a
hard Remove the article
apply
work
like productions
as Fix the agreement mistake
production
employees
,so the ordinary workers
might get higher earnings
because they are the essential people for improvied
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improved
improving
improvised
companies
and gained
more profits through productivity. To more precise, the Wrong verb form
gain
CEO
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CEO's
jobs
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job
are
always being inside the company Correct subject-verb agreement
is
for meeting
with Change preposition
to meet
board
of Add an article
the board
directors
and supervisors; Hence
, these kinds of directors
' work
are hardless
as compared to the Correct your spelling
hard
employees
, thus
they do not get more hikes
.
To conclude
, the administartive
officers are Correct your spelling
administrative
being
gotten Verb problem
getting
much
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apply
earnings
than workers
; this
is not a fair decision
to provide more
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higher
salary
to them Fix the agreement mistake
salaries
instead
of production workers
; this
is a fair decision
for giving
more Change preposition
to give
hikes
to the directors
because their's
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their
work
is stressful and double job rather than employees
. Therefore
, in my opinion about this
, the CEO should get more earnings
like how work
they do equal to get hiike
.Correct your spelling
hike
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