The diagrams below show the main reasons workers chose to work from home and the hours males and females worked at home for the year 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the main reasons workers chose to work from home and the hours males and females worked at home for the year 2019.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams illustrate the major reasons workers choose to work remotely and the total duration spent
for
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working for both
males
and females in 2019.
Overall
,
it is clear that
saving money had the highest percentage and the majority of
males
worked for more than thirty
hours
. The
males
and females work from home mainly because they want to save funds, the percentage
for
this
reason was 45% and 42% respectively. Some said they became more productive with a percentage of 24% for
men
and 11% for
women
. The objective to have easier childcare,
on the other hand
, had the lowest numbers which was 4% for
males
, and obviously, the
women
had six-fold than
men
.
Next,
for the
hours
occupied to work remotely, 81% of
men
spent over thirty
hours
,
while
women
only had a small number. At the range of 10-30
hours
, both were almost the same with
men
having 16% and
women
having 22%.
However
, the number of
men
working less than 10
hours
was only 3%
while
women
were much higher which was 74%.
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