The diagrams below show the main reasons workers chose to work from home and the hours males and females worked at home for the year 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the main reasons workers chose to work from home and the hours males and females worked at home for the year 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagrams illustrate the major reasons workers choose to work remotely and the total duration spent
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working for both
males
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and females in 2019.
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,
it is clear that
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saving money had the highest percentage and the majority of
males
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worked for more than thirty
hours
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. The
males
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and females work from home mainly because they want to save funds, the percentage
for
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this
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reason was 45% and 42% respectively. Some said they became more productive with a percentage of 24% for
men
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and 11% for
women
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. The objective to have easier childcare,
on the other hand
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, had the lowest numbers which was 4% for
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, and obviously, the
women
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had six-fold than
men
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.
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for the
hours
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occupied to work remotely, 81% of
men
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spent over thirty
hours
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,
while
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women
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only had a small number. At the range of 10-30
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, both were almost the same with
men
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having 16% and
women
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having 22%.
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, the number of
men
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working less than 10
hours
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was only 3%
while
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women
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were much higher which was 74%.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words males, hours, men, women with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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