The pie charts above show the percentages of industry sectors contributed to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016. Write a report of at least 150 words reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate the contributions
by
each Change preposition
of
industry
toward the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016.
Overview, in 2000, the biggest contribution were
coming from the agriculture section where the construction contributed the least. Meanwhile, in 2016, Healthcare and Correct subject-verb agreement
was
eductions
were Correct your spelling
education
supporting
the most towards the economy whilstWrong verb form
supported
, Finance
Correct your spelling
the finance
industry
was the least.
In 2000, the
agriculture gave the most support towards the economy of Turkey with almost Correct article usage
apply
one fourth
of the Add a hyphen
one-fourth
propotions
. The second was the leisure and healthcare industries, both Correct your spelling
proportions
were
equally gained 17%. Unnecessary verb
apply
However
, in 2016, The
agriculture experienced a downfall of 10% of the income which Correct article usage
apply
lower
the position to the third most contributed Wrong verb form
lowered
industry
, along with
Leisure
and hospitability area which Correct article usage
the Leisure
also
gained 3% less compared to when in
2000.
For the trade Change preposition
apply
sectors
there Add a comma
sectors,
were
an Correct subject-verb agreement
was
increased
Change the form of the verb
increase
of
Change preposition
in
the
income from 14% in 2000 to 16% in 2016. Correct article usage
apply
This
means that the trade industry
had surpassed the Leisure and Hospitality industry
as the second most contributed industry
in 2016. The
Construction Correct article usage
apply
also
gained 7% more compared when
Rephrase
apply
in
2000 with only 3% of contribution which was the lowest.Change preposition
to
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words industry with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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