You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart shows the number of tourists visiting Country X from various parts of the world and the table displays the income of different businesses in the nation in 2007 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The first picture provides information about the
number
of citizens visiting country
X
from different parts of the nation from 2007 to 2008 and the second pictures show the annual income
of average businesses in country
X
between 2019 and 2020. Overall
, it can be seen that there was an increase
Change the verb form
increasing
number
of foreign tourists from China and Japan over the period. Meanwhile, hotel
and Fix the agreement mistake
hotels
resort
experienced high Fix the agreement mistake
resorts
income
in the tourism
industry.
First and foremost, the
visitors from China and Japan were the highest Correct article usage
apply
of
Change preposition
apply
tourism
in country
X
and it began at 3,000 in 2007 and fell dramatically to 2,000 in 2008. Moreover
, in
the beginning of the period the Change the preposition
at
number
of citizen
from Australia visiting Change to a plural noun
citizens
country
X
accountend
at around 2,500 Correct your spelling
accounted
while
in 2008 saw Correct article usage
a slightly
slightly
fall to under than the Change the word
slight
last
year. Whereas
, in
Europe had Change preposition
apply
the
Correct article usage
a
similarity
Replace the word
similar
number
of visitours
from Correct your spelling
visitors
US
and Canada stood at approximately 2,000 but dropped to below 1,000 in 2008.
Correct article usage
the US
On the other hand
, there was a large income
in country
X
from the hotel and tourism
industry by 3.5 million than
the other sectors in 2019. Correct quantifier usage
more than
However
in 2020, the monthly Add a comma
However,
income
for all
the Correct determiner usage
apply
tourism
industry was
decreased to under 1.1 million, Unnecessary verb
apply
specially
for Replace the word
especially
transportasi
and travel agents at approximately 0.4 million.Correct your spelling
transportation
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, country, x, income, tourism with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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