The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The two circular charts illustrate, the total working hours and percentage in a certain nation for a variety of tasks in the years 1958 and 2008.In overview, between two different years 1958 and 2008, some

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adults were practising many activities,

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others were sleeping.

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with, in 1958, a large number of humans were working with a total percentage of 33 and only two per cent

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afford to travel to work.

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, 32% of people preferred sleeping,

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others went out with their family and friends or even

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played

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sports

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as football. Moreso, in 2008, a sharp increase was experienced for those who were always chill in their houses in 1958 and

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is clearly shown, from 8% it increased to 13% in both years respectively.

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, a slight decline occurred, from 32 per cent down to 25%

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in

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adults who spend their time

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in

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bed and

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also

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in 1958 many were going out with their

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loved

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ones, but later on, in 2008, a

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smaller

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number did

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a thing which showed by hitting of lower point with a percentage of 6.