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The graphs below show customer satisfaction levels in the US with airlines and aspects of air travel in 2003, 2005, and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show customer satisfaction levels in the US with airlines and aspects of air travel in 2003, 2005, and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of how customers were satisfied or dissatisfied regarding the US airlines' job, whilst the table depicts the proportion of customer
satisfication
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satisfaction
 with
detail
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detailed
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 aspects of air travel in three different years: 2003, 2005, and 2007. In general,
majority
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the majority
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, which is shown in
table
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the table
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, was
glad
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happy
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 with the US's major
airlines job
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airline jobs
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 in the year 2007, and the highest ratio was
also
 in 2009,
spesifically
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specifically
 on courtesy of flight attendants. In terms of
first
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the first
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 graph, the
customers
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customer's
customers'
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satisfication
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satisfaction
 level rose gradually from 65% to 77% in the given periods.
In contrast
 with the opposite level, it dropped significantly from 31% to 20%. It is clearly shown that people are happy with the
airlines
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airline's
airlines'
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 service. In regard to the table, in the range of 87% to 92%, people were happy with the service of check-in or gate agents and flight attendants in those three years. Meanwhile, the medium percentage, which
were
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was
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 59% to 79%,
experienced
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was experienced
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 by individuals who
enjoy
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enjoyed
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 the tickets' price in 2005 and 2007, and people who
are
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were
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 helped by the schedule in those periods.
In addition
, the lowest fraction was on the price of tickets in 2003 and 2005, and
also
 on the seats.
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