The world of work is changing rapidly and employees cannot depend on having the same job or the same working conditions for life. Discuss the possible causes for this rapid change, and suggest ways of preparing people for the world of work in the future.

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In 2020, the AI revolution is so rapid,

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, the changing speed of work in the world after 2020 is much faster than before the Covid situation.

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, Windows 11, provided by Microsoft, has "Copilot AI", which helps the users automatically. ChatGPT, the generative AI provided by OpenAI, generate many sentences and images

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and is just now the centre of business, which is easy jobs. There is a possibility that so many people who can do the job that AI

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can do lose their jobs. In the

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decade, AI can do only a few tasks,

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, suggesting items from the purchasing history.

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, AI can do so many things like a human today. I think people should study the structure of anything they are interested in. Getting

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is an easy thing, and everyone can do it, but the important thing is to connect

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to other ones. To achieve

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, the esports tournament was hosted by the organizers and they got so much money from sponsors to manage anything of the tournament. In my country, Japan, gathering money from the attendees is illegal. And if the company wastes money on advertising, the tax on the company would be decreased by the government. From

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, the important thing for Japanese esports tournament organisers is trying to connect with the person who is in the promotion department of a big company. In

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, I know the structure of Japanese law and esports tournaments, and I can connect

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process is still a challenging way for AI

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Develop a clear structure with an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion, guiding the reader through your points logically.

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Enhance coherence by connecting ideas and examples more cohesively, ensuring each paragraph focuses on a single main idea.

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Support main points with relevant, detailed examples, and ensure they directly address the essay prompt.

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Address all parts of the task prompt, ensuring you discuss both causes and solutions to the rapidly changing world of work.

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Illustrate your ideas with specific and relevant examples, while avoiding general statements that do not contribute to the prompt.

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Ensure a complete response by including an introduction and conclusion, each framing your essay's main points and purpose.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

291 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Automation
Artificial Intelligence (AI)
Robotics
Globalization
Outsourcing
Freelance work
Flexibility
Job Security
Education reform
Critical thinking
Adaptability
Continuous education
Retraining programs
Legislation
Corporate responsibility
Competitive edge
Work-life balance

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The world of work is changing rapidly and employees cannot depend on having the same job or the same working conditions for life. Discuss the possible causes for this rapid change, and suggest ways of preparing people for the world of work in the future.

Include an introduction and conclusion

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