The table below shows the percentage of employers in various sectors having difficulty in finding staff in 2003 and 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart shows how many employers in the four
sectors
(Manufacturing, Building, Use synonyms
Commerce
, and Services) recruited staff with three different difficulties between 2003 and 2004.
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Overall
, There was a growth in difficulties in finding skilled Linking Words
workers
and unskilled Use synonyms
workers
from 2003 and 2004 in all Use synonyms
sectors
, except the Use synonyms
commerce
sector. Recruiting technical and managerial Use synonyms
workers
was an easy task for over a year.
Nearly half of Use synonyms
workers
with skills were hard to recruit. Use synonyms
This
percentage increased considerably by around 5 % in the manufacturing, building, and services Linking Words
sectors
, and It decreased in the Use synonyms
commerce
sector from 47 % to 41 %. Use synonyms
Likewise
, unskilled Linking Words
workers
Use synonyms
also
had the same trend, with a surge of 5 % in all Linking Words
sectors
, with an exception in the Use synonyms
commerce
sector, dropping to 19 %.
Finding Use synonyms
workers
with competency in technical and managerial was the easiest task among other categories. The Use synonyms
overall
percentage was below 15 % in 2003, and Linking Words
this
number had a gradual decline below 10 % in all parts in 2004.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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