The table below shows the percentage of employers in various sectors having difficulty in finding staff in 2003 and 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart shows how many employers in the four
sectors
(Manufacturing, Building, Commerce
, and Services) recruited staff with three different difficulties between 2003 and 2004.
Overall
, There was a growth in difficulties in finding skilled workers
and unskilled workers
from 2003 and 2004 in all sectors
, except the commerce
sector. Recruiting technical and managerial workers
was an easy task for over a year.
Nearly half of workers
with skills were hard to recruit. This
percentage increased considerably by around 5 % in the manufacturing, building, and services sectors
, and It decreased in the commerce
sector from 47 % to 41 %. Likewise
, unskilled workers
also
had the same trend, with a surge of 5 % in all sectors
, with an exception in the commerce
sector, dropping to 19 %.
Finding workers
with competency in technical and managerial was the easiest task among other categories. The overall
percentage was below 15 % in 2003, and this
number had a gradual decline below 10 % in all parts in 2004.Submitted by 2024successielts on
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