The table below shows the percentage of employers in various sectors having difficulty in finding staff in 2003 and 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the percentage of employers in various sectors having difficulty in finding staff in 2003 and 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart shows how many employers in the four
sectors
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(Manufacturing, Building,
Commerce
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, and Services) recruited staff with three different difficulties between 2003 and 2004.
Overall
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, There was a growth in difficulties in finding skilled
workers
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and unskilled
workers
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from 2003 and 2004 in all
sectors
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, except the
commerce
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sector. Recruiting technical and managerial
workers
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was an easy task for over a year. Nearly half of
workers
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with skills were hard to recruit.
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percentage increased considerably by around 5 % in the manufacturing, building, and services
sectors
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, and It decreased in the
commerce
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sector from 47 % to 41 %.
Likewise
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, unskilled
workers
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also
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had the same trend, with a surge of 5 % in all
sectors
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, with an exception in the
commerce
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sector, dropping to 19 %. Finding
workers
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with competency in technical and managerial was the easiest task among other categories. The
overall
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percentage was below 15 % in 2003, and
this
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number had a gradual decline below 10 % in all parts in 2004.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
Vocabulary: Replace the words sectors, commerce, workers with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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