The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2020. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
as we see the chart illustrate the percentage of woman and men
teachers
in 6 different type
of educational schools Change to a plural noun
types
which
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apply
presented
by Add a missing verb
were presented
UK
in 2020.
In nursery Correct article usage
the UK
pre-school
female Correct your spelling
preschool
teachers
cantaining near 90% of the teachers
, it is the same situation in primary school. On the other hand
, chart
shows that the teaching responsibility was divided in half between male and female Add an article
the chart
teachers
in college . In the the secondary school near
55% of the Change the word
nearly
teachers
were women and the rest comes
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came
to
the Change preposition
from
men
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male
teachers
. In privet training institudes
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institutes
near
60% of trainers are men Change the word
nearly
also
, Add an article
the university
university
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universities
used
male Wrong verb form
use
teachers
40% more than women trainers.
Overall
, using male or female teachers
depends on the major you want to teach and the age rate of the institude's
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institution's
student
which in my opinion Fix the agreement mistake
students
this
chart clear that the UK did well about
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apply
it
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apply
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