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you recently made resiverattion at resturent. wright to letter to project manager. state what problem you had with the food you ordared complain about services

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to express a concern I have about the food Quality at your
restaurant
. Yesterday I visited your
restaurant
 for special reasons and I booked a table in advance. I had ordered Noodles two mocktails and some piner stater. Total three Itams I had ordered. The Resterorat staff had not taken orders properly He had provided chicken noodles. A mocktail is
also
 provided at the time of dinner. he not serving food properly
furthermore
 Peneer starter Qualify is
also
 not good. I had raised a complaint with another staff they are not recording
this
 complaint.
also
, we are vegetarian but still, they had charged for poolside chicken which was incorrect. I need my full money back from
this
restaurant
. And need appositely letter form staff for
this
 miss behaver.
Otherwise
, I will take action on the
aging
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restaurant
. Regards, Aakansha Tiwari
Submitted by t.akanksha.mba on

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coherence cohesion
For coherence and cohesion, you must organize your letter into clear paragraphs, each with a distinct purpose. Begin with an introduction stating the purpose of your letter, follow with body paragraphs that elaborate on the problem and your complaints, and finalize with a conclusion summarizing your expectations or required actions. Ensure you logically transition between points and use appropriate linking words to enhance readability.
task achievement
Regarding task achievement, ensure that you address all parts of the prompt fully. This includes stating the problem (which you've done briefly), giving details about the food and service issues (which could be expanded upon for clarity), and explaining what you would like the restaurant to do about the situation. The aim is to communicate your message with enough detail for the recipient to understand and possibly act upon.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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