the graph below shows average carbon dioxide(co2) emission per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden,Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007

the graph below shows average carbon dioxide(co2) emission per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden,Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007
The line graph demonstrates average
carbon
dioxide
(CO2) emissions per capita in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal from 1967 to 2007. The average
number
of individual CO2 emissions in Italy and Portugal witnessed annual steady growth throughout the
period
given.
Meanwhile
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in the United Kingdom and Portugal, each person's average CO2 emissions
number
generally experienced downward trends. In 1967, people in the United Kingdom produced just above 10
tons
carbon
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dioxide
in
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average.
Then
, the
number
gradually declined throughout the
period
given to more or less 8
tons
in 2007. As for Sweden, the
carbon
dioxide
(CO2) average
number
rose steeply between 1967 and 1977 from around 8
tons
to 10
tons
.
However
, it fell dramatically
to
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the rest of the given
period
at approximately 5
tons
in 2007. In Italy, individual average
carbon
dioxide
began at 4
tons
in 1967. The
number
rose steeply between 1967 and 1977 to around 6
tons
and went up gradually for the remainder of the
period
. As for Portugal, the
number
grew steadily from about a ton to around 3
tons
in
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between 1967 and 1987. The
number
rose significantly from 1987 to 1997 reaching approximately 5
tons
and stayed at that level until the final decade of the
period
given.
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