he line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries, and the pie chart shows the percentages of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time.
The line graph illustrates the number of
books
that were rented between June and September in
2014 from four village Change preposition
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libraries
, while
the pie chart gives data on the percentage, by genre, in four-month
period.
Generally, Add an article
a four-month
the four-month
Correct article usage
the numer
numer
of borrowed Correct your spelling
number
books
fluctuated during this
time and fiction was more popular than the other types.
As it
presented, the highest number of borrowed Correct pronoun usage
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books
was 300, from Ryeslip in June,
2014. With 250 rents, Sutton Wood Remove the comma
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library
stood as the second highest lender at that time. West Eaton and Church Mount Capitalize word
Library
libraries
gave 50 books
in June. Ryeslip libraries
number of borrowed Change noun form
library's
libraries'
books
gradually decreased by
Change preposition
over
the
time and reached Correct article usage
apply
to
150. Sutton Wood, Change preposition
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on the contrary
, it
went higher to make it almost double than the other three Correct pronoun usage
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libraries
. Over the months, the books
borrowed from West Eaton and Church Mount increased to having a similar index, which equals to
150 in September.
Fiction type of Change preposition
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books
were
the most borrowed genre, more than 40%. Change the verb form
was
Borrowing
ratio for history and science Correct article usage
The borrowing
books
accounted for 14% each and that was 5% lower than that of biology books
. Self-help books
’ borrowing ratio was exactly 10% which indicated one in ten books
borrowed had this
genre.Submitted by dnm.best on
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